Writer’s Infusion critiqued part of my first chapter of my new book, Red Satin Ribbons.  They also provide you with a handwritten copy of their recommended changes–invaluable during the revising process.

Use what you can from this video to help improve your writing.  Feel free to submit to Writer’s Infusion.  They take short stories that are  1,200 words or less.  It’s free.  It might take three to eight weeks for a response.  As you can see, they gave me good feedback.

Happy writing, everyone.

Donna