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Writing Tips – Words to Avoid – No. 9
Here is another site with writing tips for those seeking to perfect their craft:
http://www.freelancewriting.com/articles/ten-words-to-avoid-when-writing.php
You might also find this word substitute list helpful:
Donna B. Comeaux
Freelance Writer, Novelist, Poet
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Writing Tips – Provoking Emotions – Power Words for Writers No. 6
If I haven’t expressed this before, I want you to know that I am willing to share any and everything I know about writing. I’m not an expert. Far from it. But I am determined to share. I won’t waste much of your time here. So, let me get to the point.
Today, I shared my writing journey with a friend of mine. As I did so, she said to me, “Donna, what you need to do is look up power words. I always had a list of power words I used when writing.”
Power words. Power words? Is there such a thing? Yes! (and that’s an emphatic “YES!”)
I found a website that lists power words used to evoke all kinds of emotions. Don’t believe they work? Listen to CNN. This news channel evokes fear in us all day long and to do so they use these same “power” words over and over and over again.
Here’s the website: http://boostblogtraffic.com/power-words/
This is only one of many many websites. Search the internet and find your favorite one and use it. Be wise and crafty. Use them where needed; at the right time. Don’t overuse them. Power words without a substantive and well-written novel won’t get you very far.
Good luck to each of you. Please return the favor. If you have tips you can share with me and others, please do so. And don’t fail to go to my main menu and look at Writing Tips Nos. 1 – 5.
Donna B. Comeaux
Freelance Writer, Poet, Novelist
Fighting That Six-Inch War – The Long Grey Line
View of West Point from across the Hudson River
Chris Pestel is a 2003 graduate from the United States Military Academy at West Point. He has become a storyteller and photographer. One of the pieces he recently wrote is entitled “To Fight & Die For That Inch.” In his writings, Chris reveals the true meaning behind the fight for an inch of turf. I could spell it out for you here, reveal the essence of it all, and, no doubt, you’d probably guess the truth Chris so poignantly reveals. But what you don’t know are the people behind this truth. You don’t know their struggles. You don’t know how important it is to win their game of tug and war. You don’t know the pain of so many losses . . . on a public field of play . . . or their fight to keep their heads high in the midst of defeat. You don’t know the depth of responsibility placed on their shoulders. You haven’t seen their faces or felt their pain.

Picture of 2003 Army Football Players on Graduation Day
Here is your chance.
If you’ll indulge in this pictorial and narrative account of a team’s fight for perseverance, you’ll begin to clearly see the truth you may already know. That life can’t be measured by mere wins and losses. Life involves more . . . Well, why don’t you let Chris Pestel tell you what life is really about by clicking or pasting this link in your browser: https://medium.com/@chrisWpestel/to-fight-die-for-that-inch-1284c1e25d88
After reading this and gazing at these amazing photographs, can you really come up with a valid excuse “not” to finish your task at hand? I can’t. These pictures leave no room for me to have a tantrum and throw in the towel. No one has ever asked me to place myself on the Long Grey Line and play a six-inch war game on a public stage. All in the face of a losing season year after year. On top of all that, I find it appalling that anyone would expect me to remain silent and loyal when asked to put on a recognizable uniform and walk among millions, proud. And if that isn’t enough: “While you’re at it soldier, strap on a gun and headgear and march to the front line.”
2003 Corps of Cadets
Makes me think twice about throwing another pity party. After reading this, I’d rather strap on another breatplate of determination and press toward my goals. My weapons of choice? God and a positive attitude.
Tell me something–are you ready to gear up and fight failure? I am. Let’s get after it! Today! No more procrastination.
See you at the end of the fight. If I get there before you, I’ll ready the celebration banquet and save a place for you.
I see balloons flying overhead. 2015 is already starting out to be a prosperous year. We’ve got plenty of reasons for an early celebration. I’m expecting a victory!!
GO ARMY! BEAT NAVY!
Donna B. Comeaux
Freelance Writer, Poet, Author
Writing for The Huffington Post
I found this article on http://www.thewritelife.com website and thought I’d pass it along. I have been contemplating writing for The Huffington Post for some time now. Here are tips on how to get started:
http://thewritelife.com/how-to-write-for-the-huffington-post/
Please come back to my website and share your experience.
Thanks for stopping by.
Donna B. Comeaux


